Jul 18, 2007

Shame Sait, Nifferent Dame:



This is another type of poetry named "Anaphora." So the idea with this one is to find some word or short string of words and use them again and again throughout the poem. There's no real rule to how you have to use the phrase, only that it has to be reoccurring to be considered an Anaphoric poem. Here we go... uh.... yeah... uh... bad boy... take dat take dat take dat.... can't stop won't stop... UH! lol, just kidding, had a Diddy moment but I'm back now. Ok... Anaphora!


Here's Hoping

I am hope
Full. That things will change.
I am hope
Ing. That love will remain.
I hope for brighter days
Filled with Darker people.
I hope for the best,
Prepare for the
Worst thing that can happen.
I am hope
less


~By. eBanks~

3 comments:

  1. I like style more, it's cute

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  2. I really like the poems. They definitely are not from the "slam" genre(not that anything is wrong with that) but I like that they are different and saying alot with a few words. I'm not extremely into poetry so I can't make technical comments. BUT I know I like them. Good stuff!

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  3. Well, I'm glad to see that at least somebody is really reading my blog. I can't lie to you. I hate the anonymous comments cause I want to know who thinks what. But I mean hey, some people don't have any comments at all, so I guess I should be thankful! lol. Well, thanks again for the feed back. And please keep comments whoever you are. I DO read them, and I DO think about any an all feed back when I trying new things. So help me make me better!!

    ~Thanks~

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